Beta readers needed (pun intended). Also, Alpha females!

Cross-posted from Member Fiction.

Hi All,

I've finished a novella that explores my past as a maledom and my current feelings about entering a FLR with my wife. Altogether, if's 45,000 words, about 20% shorter than a standard Harlequin romance.

The book contains a lot of steamy scenes, but it's not intended as wank fodder, but rather an exploration of emotions and motivations and real-life relationships. For reference, my other two entries on Member Fiction (The Turnaround and Caught in the Act!) are chapters 7 and 1 of the novella, respectively.

I would be greatly appreciative of any feedback anyone with lived experience would like to share with me: what works, what doesn't work; what is interesting, what is boring, etc.

If you'd like to read the piece and provide feedback, please DM or comment here.

Thanks!