Just a poem I wrote

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    I was reading a lot of e.e. cummings a while back and it inspired me to write this poem for my GF. Anyone else interested in poetry?

    because falling down hurts

    because

    I wanted to be different
    then to love and lose
    I just got lost in her

    falling

    because I wanted to
    I told her I never
    came I just went

    down

    it spirals infinitely
    faster together is
    better than separate

    hurts

    if alone we wander and
    wonder to what end
    is this love.
     
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    Looks like there's not too many out there lol
     
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    What a wonderful poem!
    I would love it if I had received that!
    Will you write some more?????
     
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    i likes it LC. it very good.
     
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    Thank you very much. My Girlfriend really liked it too :) I do write poems fairly often, but this one was very different from what I normally write. And it vaguely refers to chastity so I thought I would share it ;) Maybe I'll post more as time goes on.
    If anyone else writes poetry and wants to share it, I'd love to read it!
     
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