The Upgrade - a one-sided dialogue story

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  1. keephimcaged
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    After all this wonderful feedback, I've been inspired...

    I've just finished another one. Working through the draft atm.

    It's twice as long (size does matter). :p
     
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    Can't wait!
     
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    very well written. And like the others I liked the one sided dialogue also. The only thing I would say is maybe slow it down a bit, more teasing, seemed like wham bam thank you ma'm ha ha.
     
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    Yep, agreed, although that partly comes from the reading only half the story maybe.

    Anyway, new one is posted here:
    http://www.chastitymansion.com/foru...nsion-another-dialogue-by-keephimcaged.18380/
    Let me know what you think!

    Jane xxx
     
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    It was an amazing story !! I think it would be so hot to do in real life . I have seen these kits where you can get a penis mold and make a strap on of your own penis . My wife loves penetration sex with me but I am about as big as she can take . We always have to start out slow and work up to the whole thing . It would help both of us to do this she could have my dick while I could keep my frustration buzz !! She has rode my cage alone a couple of times and always gets off and it's very exciting for me . But she says it makes her sore after. I would love to see he cum from my dick while I was still locked !! Thanks again for the story !! My Holley Trainer is so tight my balls are on fire !!!
     
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    keephimcaged My humble thanks for your contribution to our minds (yes, the largest sex organ we have!) and to the confines of our cages. Speaking as a 'smaller' fella, I can relate and would so love to try an extender some day (& I bet she would too...!). Again, keep writing for our constrained 'expansion' loves to torment. Kisses.
     
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    Just read your story and it is really excellent! I'm filling my cage with emotional desire for denial! The one sided discussion reminds me of being silenced with a lovely ball gag! Miss KH can have so much putting words in your mouth when she uses a ball gag just like she can reward you with complements for your length and girth that are silicone and not you! Delicious denial and despair. Please write mor of the same! You are very talented!
     
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