Should we change the subtitle What do you think?

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    If it isn't broke, don't fix it! Please leave it as is!
     
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    No. It ain't broke, so do not fix it!!
     
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    Let's leave well enough alone please...
     
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    This is a silly thread.
     
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    Why change? I like the one we have.
     
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    "The Premium Source On Chastity Lifestyle" is poor English. It should read "The Premium Source On The Chastity Lifestyle".
     
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    And the word Premium sounds like it's a pay for site. A better word to use would be Premier, but both words sound naff.

    Dont be shy though, just go for "The No.1 source of chastity lifestyle" and be done with it! ;)
     
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    "The No.1 source for the chastity lifestyle" - The site itself is not the source of the lifestyle, but is a source for those who live the lifestyle.
     
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    So in fact it is the resource for the life style .
    But I definitely go with if it aint broke ....

    Xx Wendy
     
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    It just fits.
     
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    Excellent suggestion! Our new subtitle: " It just fits "
     
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    I see the header has been changed, but the English is still wrong. Looks illiterate.

    Maybe it would be even better if it read "The Premium Source for the Chastity Lifestyle". At least it would be proper English.
     
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    It does sound a little like an advert for Ketchup. :)
     
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    Billus - there are more non-native English speakers on the planet than native ones, and their version of English has now become a language in it's own right.

    No-one really cares about 'proper' English anymore - the issue is the general style of the thing rather than the detail of how correct the English is. Common usage alters the language constantly anyway.
     
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    Oh baloney, Verity. Wheen you tipe guud noe like tis, peepsuls tink u dummb. I understand the fluidity of language, but what you're saying is that it's acceptable to just be lazy. Sorry, that doesn't cut it.
     
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    So "doesn't cut it" is correct English? Hmmn? It might be common usage, but it's hardly correct English.

    By the way, what is balony?
     
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    What's the relevance of a word that has multiple spellings, or a common expression, got to do with incorrect grammar?

    Ultimately, I don't care. If admin wants to look uneducated to some people who come here, that's not my problem. I just pointed it out, not expecting to get into a pissing match with someone who's trying to defend illiteracy. Whatever. Another example of what anyone with a differing opinion from the powers that be has to put up with. Easier to blame the messenger rather than fix the mistake. Leave it up then. Look, you win. Whoopie.
     
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    Dude, you're calling for "Correct English" yet using Americanisms and colloquialisms left and centre.
    All I said was that language is a fluid thing, relax ok?

    Aaand back to the new logo.

    What is the strange red arrow attached to the C, and why does it have an I in it's middle?
     
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    I also vote to take out the premium source bit. It is unnecessary. It is missing 'for information about' in the middle but even adding that just leaves the whole sentence messy. I like the be careful what you wish for, it says everything that is needed. The title of the forum, Chastity Mansion, makes the rest perfectly clear.
     
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    I thought the i was the keyhole in the padlock?
     
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    i like the Ladys legs and i love Her shoes.
     
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    I would have preferred "The source for your Chastity Lifestyle"
    I just don't thing the word "premium" fits or sounds right. Just my 2 cents worth.
     
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    Your legs are quite nice too
     
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    I like it but am always open to change if someone thinks of something better. However, I'm sad the sexy legs are not still on the home page.... it gave me something to work towards. :) ;)
     
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    that's very nice of you to say. mwah xxxxx
     
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