I LOVE this poem that my sub wrote for me.

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    Mistress Manteo

    The staccato click of her heels on the tile
    She loves its effect and she knowingly smiles
    The look of her legs so long and so lean
    The sway of her breasts, with a locket between
    The key it contains unlocks more than my jewels
    But touching my sex is against all her rules
    It ensures my attention is where it should be
    And all of my thoughts are on her, not on me

    Her confident beauty commands my respect
    She makes my knees weak, my nerves are a wreck
    Her all knowing stare can see right through my soul
    I’ve dreamt of this woman since just 6 years old

    She embodies the pure definition of power
    On my knees in the dark she could keep me for hours
    To serve her and please her, to show my devotion
    Fills my heart and loins with unbridled emotion

    Before her I kneel, I am bare to the bone
    I’m naked of more than just clothing alone
    My deepest desires, for things I’ve never spoken
    To be taken, enslaved to be utterly broken
    All of these things in truth set me free
    They finally allow me to truly be me
    To love her, to serve her, to cherish, adore
    Is the reason I’m down on my knees on the floor

    My love and my lust for her are without measure
    She’s truly the center of all of my pleasure
    Your leather I love and your cruelty I crave
    This secret I thought that I’d take to my grave
    The day you discovered the power you hold
    It started to grow like a flower to unfold
    You wield it and use it with surgeon like skill
    It’s much more addictive than drink or a pill

    This collar reminds me that I’m truly yours
    My place at your feet, I’m down on all fours
    You’ve locked it so tight ‘round my neck like a ring
    You cannot imagine the pride that it brings

    My feet off the brakes now; there’s no end in sight
    My hands off the wheel; I’m consumed by the ride
    My total submission’s the best I can do
    It’s not about me though, it’s all about you.
     
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    susie q Dear friend of the Mistress Michelle clan

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    Bravo!!! :)
     
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    i love it too. A most excellent description.

    MM's sweetpea
    rachel
     
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    Wow, pretty amazing poem... :) Well done!
     
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    What an excellent expression - so many of those feelings are ones that i share!
     
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    I was to be out of town for a few days and gave my boy a LONG "to do" list. One of the items on my list of instructions was to write me a poem about what it meant for him to be my slave. That was what he came up with. I was plesantly surprised.

    Thanks for the positive replies!

    Smiles

    Mistress Manteo
     
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    That's so good, I'm very impressed, your "boy" has talent.
    Read it to my Mistress, she loved it do.
    Hope he was rewarded ;)
     
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