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Discussion in 'Member fiction' started by mikecb, Aug 28, 2010.

  1. xcitedsisssy
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    xcitedsisssy cd/sissy michelle

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    Mike What a great story! Once I started reading it I could'nt stop until I finished it. Again what a great read.
     
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    That was a damn good short story. Great job keeping every character consistent
     
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    Hi Mike

    I found you story tonight for the first time tonight.
    I found my self in a state that i cannot even begin to describe.
    My wife and i have been starting out in this life style and i am the driving one.Kitten (my wife and queen)is very new and is not one for surfing the internet but dose appreciate a good story. Your writing has opened up a door of my expression and passion burning deep inside of me .

    I cannot thank you for taking the time to share such an expressive an detailed story with us.
    Your writing is fantastic and also opens up doors for this of us who battle to express our selfs to our partners.
    I have sent this to my wife and it has opened up a path of communication of understanding and trust between the 2 of us.

    thank you so much
     
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    Aww, thanks everyone. I just saw some of the more recent (in the last month) comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

    mikecb
     
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    Joroincharge Lock em up - 24/7/365!!

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    And well deserved. I myself really don't go for fiction, as a rule. But this one was different. I waas sad to see it end. I had hoped to see more of how the relationship developed at and during the marriage and onwards. But the concept was brilliant.
     
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    Wow, I don't think I've ever been to this part of the Mansion so I started at the top. What a great afternoon it's been reading this excellent story.

    I feel like I'm 18 as I'm in my full metal belt and 34 days in chastity. Reading this story made me remember my hormones at age 18 and I'm 54. Perfect match for a quiet Sunday afternoon.

    Thanks for your efforts.
     
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    Joroincharge Lock em up - 24/7/365!!

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    Could the story have a sequel?
     
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    I haven't read this in awhile, and it still is rivetting. I was stealing moments at work to read this on my Iphone. I am posting this in hopes that new members will take a look at a great story!
     
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    Thanks for the kind comments. I'm (slowly) working on another long story (Barely There). The first four installments are on my blog. I'm in the midst of working on a few more chapters, but I'm reworking it some. It wasn't steamy enough! ;-p

    mikecb
     
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    Mike,
    I don't normally make comments on a story. But damn. This has most definitely been the best story I have had the opportunity to read. I have read this story while starting a new online relationship w/ a Master. During this time I was ordered to not touch Master's property between my legs. See I don't have a CB, sadly. This will be changing in the future I presume. Do you know how hard it is to not touch when reading a story so well written and so well described? DAMN!!!!!
    Thanks for the wonderful read. This has been one of the best reads I have had.
    elliot
     
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    Great story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. As lacy02 said you should publish this story.
     
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    This is by far and away the best chastity story I have ever read! I am glad someone brought it to the forefront again!
     
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    jesus what a read!

    While i'm not one for the humiliation aspect the detailed description of each scene was incredibly arousing.

    Lets just say i'm glad my new chastity cage isn't here yet, because if it was i'd be in ALOT of pain
     
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    SubVerity Still the mansion's fairy godmother. ;)

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    Well I only discovered this story this morning - @mikecb you made me late for work!
    And having got in an hour ago have done nothing but read the rest!

    A very nice story. I found the T-shirt thing a bit much personally. I'm not a fan of rubbing other peoples noses in the business of sexual behaviour, And a young woman in charge of that kind of cash isn't likely to draw attention to her own lifestyle by forcing her boyfriend to wear such things. She's be party to a certain amount of media attention in this day and age.

    Otherwise - great story.

    Did you ever publish it anywhere?

    Ever think of doing a re-write and fleshing it out a little more?
     
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    Amazing story! Thanks for sharing!
     
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    Joroincharge Lock em up - 24/7/365!!

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    I thought so too. I don't much go for fiction as a rule (though occasionally I have an inspiration) but this is definitely an exception. Great story!
     
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    maid jessica 43 I want to be a 24/7 365 sissy maid

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    Amazing story
    Curtsy
     
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    Going through old fiction and decided this one needs a bump
     
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    I totally agree Joro!
     
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    I agree it's a great read. At the time I asked Mike to mention that the t-shirt captions in the story were taken from my online shop, but he apparently decided not to credit me for them.
     
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    Real Hot
     
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    I was sad when I got to the end of the thread. I can’t wait for the story to continue.
     
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    this was an awesome read glad I found this.!!
     
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    So glad I found this story. Thanks to @Joroincharge for bumping it so that it came to the top of the pile. And how can I adequately express my thanks to @mikecb for such an amazing story. Do you have any more like this lurking around, @mikecb ?
     
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