Female Lead World

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    I'm kicking around writing a piece of erotica about a female led workd where on a guys 18th birthday he is locked in chastity and assigned a key holder at random (or auctioned I haven't decided on this point yet) from his zone (think Zip Code)

    At birth, male infants are sect to The Asylum where they are taught basic math, reading, obedient training, domestic chores and whatever menial tasks they are tracked for.

    Is this a book you would read? I'm especially interested in the opinion s of ladies since this is who generally read erotica... Well mostly.
     
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    I enjoy reading the stories in the Member Fiction section on the enforced chastity in a Female led society. I feel that the World would be a much better place if women were in charge.
     
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    I really like the idea, esp. the idea of an 18 year old being auctioned off to say a 48 year old woman.
     
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    MILK COW

    Mistress Veronica grabbed my leash and walked very fast toward the barn. Because of my ankle shackles, I fell down several times. Obviously angry, she kicked me in my already sore ribs repeatedly each time I fell.

    “Clumsy cow! Get up and walk!”

    “Yes, Mistress.” I didn’t understand her anger, but cruelty was an integral part of my existence, so I accepted her abuse without complaint.

    “Put him in his milking station,” she commanded the overseer when we entered the barn. In minutes I was secured, and the pump was beginning its milking cycle. She walked up to me and leaned forward, her violet eyes boring into mine. “This is where you belong, cow. Just because Mistress Julia was kind to you, don’t get any ideas that you are more than this. You are not a man, you are a milk cow, a piece of property like this machine or a tractor. You and the cream you produce belong to me. Understand?”

    “Yes Mistress.
     

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    641-A Story of Slavery and Emancipation

    I made an error and uploaded a draft rather than the final version. Attached is the final version with illustrations.
     

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    I wouldn’t read it.

    Personally, when I read erotica I prefer the in depth descriptions of encounters. I find excessive concepts such as this as a distraction from the purpose of the story… arousal.
     
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    I found the story interesting! Not exactly what I expected in a Female driven world, but not surprising.
     
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    VERY GOOD! Thank you for sharing this femdom delight!
     
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    Glad you enjoyed it. I have more Femdomme stories on Amazon under the penname of Lesley Douglass. You might try my novel: The Visitor.
     
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    With all due respect, DUH!
     
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    Just sounds like a Margaret Atwood novel in reverse.
     
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    Thank you for sharing this short book / story! It's very entertaining and well done. Thought provoking. Kinky. ;)
     
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