Chapter Ten - The Upper Deck Anna wakes up alone in the large bed, feeling refreshed having slept in until late morning. She assumes that Jay has...
As the story develops it gets harder to make sure continuity and consistency remains. It's my first time at writing.
Chapter Nine - The First Night "I would very much like it, Mistress, and would be eternally grateful, if you would consent to allow me to share...
I've been over the story and made some corrections. As it develops it's important that the characters remain true. Have I made any doozies? Anna...
Why stop at 14?
They're just as hairy as each other.
Give her a link to a video of you glueing the lock.
A.I.
This is my quote, not as above.
Chapter Eight - The Lady Lara "Hmm, Jay, I must admit I'm curious about where you're taking me this evening. Is there something special you...
Chapter Seven - The Last Store Then they take in one last store at Anna's request. A fetish shop, with BDSM toys and clothing. Anna's eyes light...
Chapter Six - The Shopping "Anna?" Jay says in a tone that he has something different to discuss... Anna raises an eyebrow as she notices Jay's...
Chapter Five - The Breakfast Pt.2 He has been such a good boy, but he needs calming down. She unshackles him, and instructs him to turn and lie...
Chapter Four - The Breakfast Pt.1 Anna still couldn't sleep, couldn't get Jay out of her mind, time passes and the first bird song of the...
Chapter 3 - The sleepover A few minutes later Anna starts to climb the stairs. She pauses when she realises that Jay is talking on the phone,...
There's a lot more BS to come.
Chapter Two - The Beach-House His mother had the key, thousands of miles away, on an island off South America. Anna's heart skips a beat at...
Anna and Jay Chapter One - The Beach On a secluded naturist coast, a Jay lounges bare, sipping a beer on a towel. A beautiful, but atypical...
A few errors on spelling and grammar, I hope I've corrected it. Plus Chapter Two coming soon...
Anna and Jay Chapter One On a secluded naturist coast, a Jay lounges bare, sipping a beer on a towel. A beautiful, but atypical woman,...