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  1. HappilyLockedMan
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    #1 HappilyLockedMan, Oct 26, 2022
    Hi All,

    I just finished a novel I've been writing for almost a year. With a strong story line it incorporates a lot of the topics that so many of us love: spanking, bondage, chastity and strong women who dominate their men.

    I'm hoping to get feedback on the book before I submit it to publishers. If you have the time to read a fast paced 175 pages I will send you the file.

    Thanks and I hope to hear from you.
     
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    #2 jemima, Oct 26, 2022
    hello @HappilyLockedMan i do reading and writing and you must be very good to do 175 pages i think.
     
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    #3 Huey, Oct 26, 2022
    Im happy to read through it.
     
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    #4 Hig4s, Oct 26, 2022
    How about a small sample here to see the writing style.
     
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    #5 WillieBDenied, Oct 26, 2022
    I would like to look at the first 3 chapters - that should be enough to provide feedback. Maybe DM a pdf?
     
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    #6 madams-sissysub, Oct 26, 2022
    Sounds good!
     
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    #7 Lovemetal, Oct 26, 2022
    I would like to read and give you my feed back
     
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    #8 CuriousHetero, Oct 27, 2022
    I would like to read it! I'm curious. ;)
     
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    #9 SubPeter, Oct 27, 2022
    Hey
    I would also be happy to read your book ;)
     
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    #11 HappilyLockedMan, Oct 28, 2022
    I've gotten a great response to my request for readers.

    A few of you have already provided valuable and much appreciated feedback. Thank you again.

    My requet and offer still stands. Contact me if you would like to read this novel, pre-publication.
     
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    #12 Disciplined Boyfriend, Oct 28, 2022
    I'll definitely take a look and Lady C is a proof reader in her spare time ;-)

    A
     
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    #13 chastitystrapon, Oct 29, 2022
    I'm happy to take a look
     
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    #14 Corryvrecken, Oct 29, 2022
    I'm interested in reading! Feel free to send my way.
     
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    #15 Isopropylforyou, Oct 30, 2022
    I would like to read it as well.

    Iso.
     
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    #16 Bear20, Oct 30, 2022
    Would lovd to read it. Thankyou
     
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    #17 Lady V, Oct 30, 2022
    Happy to read it.
     
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    #18 WhiteKnight, Oct 30, 2022
    Hi, I used to be a journalist and I'm also a published author of erotic fiction.
    I'd be very happy to have a read and comment for you.
    Would that also also be 'proof reading' as in error-checking ?
    Happy to do both.
    Regards and look forward to hearing from you.
     
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    #19 slutsarah, Oct 30, 2022
    i would love to read it. Send a link?
     
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    #20 Bbchastity69, Oct 30, 2022
    My pleasure to help if you still need it.
     
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    #21 lvncaged, Oct 31, 2022
    I would love to check it out.
     
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    #22 AirHoon, Nov 1, 2022
    Count me in, I read endless amounts of Kink stories and novels. Would love to check it out.
     
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    #23 SubDee, Nov 1, 2022
    I would love to read it and provide feedback
     
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    #24 HappilyLockedMan, Nov 3, 2022
    Hi,

    To those who already gave me feedback, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

    You have provided many valuable suggestions. I'm looking forward to more suggestions from those of you who haven't had the time to respond yet.

    I'm announcing a contest! The book needs a title. I will give an autographed copy of the printed version, when it comes out, to the person whose title idea I use.

    Please, lay it on me. What title will best capture the essence of the book and entice readers to pick it up and buy it?
     
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